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Today we delve into the world of the haiku.
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WALLACING by Chicago Toughill
white froth river pulse
heaving breaking crashing hole
back upon itself
beat downward ever down
no light but sounds of rushing
embraced by cold arms
rise up toward light
emerging from chaotic
pulsing river depths
A Haiku of Rivers and Life
by Rising-Sea
Rivers are like life.
Time and life flow like water
It can not be stopped.
No matter how hard
life will continue to flow
just like a river
You can try to fight
but then sooner or later
it will keep flowing
Endlessly flowing
so continue to flow down
the rivers of life
HAIKU by Taz Riggs
I took an interest in Haiku, so I went to a friend that I knew had been published. Here are four lessons that I learned:
#1. Never ask an expert for advice; The more you learn, the less you know.
#2. One breath, juxtaposition, seasons, senses, motion.
#3. Form, structure, cadence.
#4. Cheating is fair.
… so, I went and got a book. Here’s a couple class III, traditionals. A sharp class IV and attempt at a class V.
Passion or pleasure
Now let’s get down to business
All forward, my friends.
Fall leaf
Mingle ice
Leave eddy
Spring
Stopped by current
Held in flow
Downstream
Go
Face down
Drive rain
Taste fear
Believe, amend
Arms wide
Sun warm
Hear smile
Receive, ascend
Feet fly
Leaf drift
See kiss
Release, defend
Hands close
Snow wisp
Smell near
Relearn, unbend
Ears high
Howl wind
Touch tear
Begin, again
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all solid good reads! but Taz….. Two big fat monkey thumbs up!